Spiderman:
Spiderman is a fantastic superhero. He likes as spider.
His first aparition was in the comics and then in the television. Spiderman was a normal boy Peter Parker ,but one day something strange happened. A spider sting him and he had powerfuls. He dresses like a spider and he fights against the villains, but not all the story about spiderman is fighting. He loves a girl.You can see the girl in the photo, but his love is impossible because Spiderman doesn´t want nothing bad for she.
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ReplyDeleteSpiderman is a fantastic superhero. He (likes as) IS LIKE A spider.
(His first aparition was in the) HE FIRST APPEARED IN comics and then (in) ON the television. Spiderman was a normal boy, Peter Parker, but one day something strange happened. A spider stUng him and he had powerS(fuls). He dresses like a spider and he fights against the villains, but not all the storIES about spiderman( is) ARE ABOUT fighting. He loves a girl.You can see the girl in the photo, but his love is impossible because Spiderman doesn´t want (nothing bad for she) ANYTHING BAD TO HAPPEN TO HER.